This script. It is a nice script. Characters are working. Dialogue is working. There is structure. Emotion. Tone. Pacing. The writer even has voice. Things are going great. Then a character in the script starts picking strawberries off a vine.
Strawberries do not grow on vines.
I am reading this script. The story is set on a farm. The chickens all live in the barn.
Chickens are not kept in barns.
I am reading this script. A character asks, What’s that smell? Uh oh. The lead character has “deer poop” on her shoe.
Anyone here know what “deer poop” looks like? Kym does but for the city kids, it looks like pellets. Hard little pellets and deers are herbivores so if it smells like anything it smells like grass.
I am reading this script….